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Pure White Eyes Father's Day Comic!

Published: Jun 17, 2017

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Description

Tomorrow is Father's Day! Be sure to go over to him and hug your papa (or something)!
Kids expressing their love for their appas! More kids forgetting that it was Father's Day! And more appas punishing their children for not getting them anything!
Can't wait to see it all!

Remember when you guys said stuff like "OML The mothers day co mic is SOOoOOOooo long!"
Well, this one has literally more than 200 panels! Two frickin hundred! Too many brain cells were sacrificed in the making of this comic.
In fact, the comic was so long, that I had to separate them into two parts! Both should be at least 100 panels long!

This one is my favorite out of the three PWE comics I've uploaded so far! This one introduces a whole lot of characters, maybe too much.
It's definitely rushed, though. Some of the writing is quite weird to read out loud, segments of the comic seem like they escalated too quickly, and some of the panels in general look kinda gross XD
But hey, I'm still climbing my way to make a somewhat good comic series so I guess this just acts as progress.
Plus, it still made me laugh when I reread it (even though I made it XD)! So that's good, I guess!

To read the comic, just click on those two huge squares right below this sentence!